Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It had been a controversial issue, for a long time, whether punishment for crimes should be fixed or the incentive is an influential factor that is crucial to be considered. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and extend my support for the latter opinion.
On the one hand, some people argue that the advantage of having one set of punishment for each crime overweigh its disadvantage. They maintain that fixing punishments will probably save not only much time but also an enormous amount of money that could otherwise save for other sectors such as education and health. For example, if the circumstances of individual crimes or the motivation for committing this action needs to be considered, the government has to spend nation budget for many factors such as the payment for the lawyers and police security. Another reason for believing this policy is that a fixed punishment for each crime could deter criminals since they would realize which punishment is going to strict. An international survey shows that the crime rates in some countries decline significantly after adopting a very strictly and hash punitive system.
However, fixing punishments seem to be an unfair justice system. It is possible for two people who commit murders to have entirely different motivations. For instance, one action is considered as self-defense when someone attacks her or him while the reason for other is because of the assent. Furthermore, in many cases, there are hidden reasons behind the crime committed. In many countries and communities, especially in the developing countries, poverty and blackmailing are strong factors influencing crime rates. Psychologically speaking, some psychologists claim that people act at present is directly influenced by some forgettable events in the past and multiple personality disorders is the main reason one person has crime act. Thus, it is crucial to consider all the circumstances surrounding a defendant or case to issue a just.
In my opinion, both arguments have their merits, but there is no reason to have a fixed punishment for each crime. Considering the circumstances behind each crime is paramount to reach a fair and just verdict for everyone in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...s her or him while the reason for other is because of the assent. Furthermore, in many cas...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...urrounding a defendant or case to issue a just. In my opinion, both arguments have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, in many cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21388888889 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95929040335 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8267952486 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.3125 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441811863991 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138686490021 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870069348861 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271451548789 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062228671055 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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