The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 the information. Select and describe main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 the information. Select and describe main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare the age groups of Yemen and italy residents in 2000 and what is expected after 50 years. The unit is in percentage.
Overall, in Yemen, the numbers of 60 years and above, and 15 -59 year olds will increase while that of children will drop. A decline in the numbers of 15-59 years and 0-14 years is expected in italy by 2050.
Half of Yemen's population in 2000 was children but will reduce to just over one- third in 50 years. Whereas, a growth of almost 10% is projected for the percentage of 15-59 year olds, which was 46.3% in 2000. Similarly, 2050 will see an improvement in the proportion of the elders, from 3.6% to 5.7%; the least in both years.
The people aged 15- 59 years made up two-third of italy's population in 2000, this will fall significantly to 46% by 2050. Likewise, the percentage of children will record a decrease of about 3% in future; lowest for the periods. Lastly, the number of 60 years and above is for seen to double after 50 years

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, likewise, similarly, third, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37324478007 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565934065934 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.520901148 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163464418342 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705584625158 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540442021409 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114998427332 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394188447325 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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