The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The given pie graphs give information about the rate of nutrients such as sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar for main daily meals in America.
Overall, the initial impression from the charts is that the highest proportion for the saturated fat and the sodium nutrients showed in the dinner meal. While the largest percentage for added sugar appeared in snacks.
For saturated fat ingredient, the rate was 37% in dinner meal which is almost doubled the percentage in the breakfast meal, just 16 %. Whereas, furthermore, the lowest proportion was in snacks, just 21 per cent.
For sodium element, the highest proportion witnessed an increase by 6% compared with the percentage of saturated fat in the dinner meal. moreover, The rate in snacks is as the same as in the breakfast meal, just 14% which is lower than the rate of saturated fat nutrient in snacks.
For added sugar nutrient, the amount of added sugar in snacks was 42% which is a twice the rate in the dinner meal, just 23%. In addition, the percentage in breakfast was 16% which is as low as the sodium ingredient (14%). The healthier meal is the breakfast according to the figures which presented in the graphs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84158415842 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57126813761 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465346534653 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2306136226 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125840285834 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652760589974 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347435235254 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840007159306 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298156101923 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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