The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995
and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.
The graphs give information about the Japanese tourists in millions for each year traveling to abroad from year 1985-1995 and percentage of Japanese visiting to Australia.
Overall, from graphs it is patent that in decade, number of Japanese traveling abroad have increased by enormous rate. similarly, Japanese visiting to Australia have also shown great increment.
In the year 1985, number of japanese travelling abroad was about 5 million and 2% of those chose Australia as destination. Moreover, such increase in percentage of japanese occurring in Australia tend to increase up till 1988 with about 4.9% of Australia share in japan tourist market while japan’s tourists accounted to 8.4 million. However, the japan’s tourists travelling abroad continued to increase, even though australia share decline in year 1989 to about 4.2% with about 10 million japanese traveled to abroad. Australia’s market showed steep increase in subsequent years till 1994 reaching it’s peak value where 6.1% of 14 million japanese tourists visited to australia.
In year 1995, the japanese traveling to abroad rose to 15 million despite small decrease in australia’s share resulting into 6% of japan’s tourists market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similarly
...abroad have increased by enormous rate. similarly, Japanese visiting to Australia have al...
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Line 9, column 86, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this chose' or 'those choses'?
Suggestion: this chose; those choses
...ng abroad was about 5 million and 2% of those chose Australia as destination. Moreover, suc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72043010753 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96544246275 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3143001833 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495051106659 0.215688989381 230% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.265242696761 0.103423049105 256% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711254069956 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329002936256 0.15604864568 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879917486853 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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