The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of freshman students in North West University by their chosen faculty, and foreign (Non-US) arts students.
Overall, the most popular study programs for incoming students are Science, Arts and Computing, whereas Medicine and Law are the least. The most common nationality of Arts students by far is South American and the second largest group comprises of European scholars.
In regard to faculty distribution among students joining the university, Computing, Arts, Science account of 22%, 23% and 21% of the chosen faculties, respectively, with Arts being the most popular study program. On the other hand, both Medicine and Law together account for just over 10% of all scholars. As for the faculty of Business, 14% of students have chosen to study there, leaving Engineering with less than 10% of freshmen.
Turning to biggest faculty in North West University (Arts), it can be seen, that more than half of the international students come from South America (79 scholars), meanwhile there are 21 students from Europe. Other nationality incoming students (Asian, African, and Australian) are 11 individuals altogether.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the biggest'.
Suggestion: to the biggest
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, so, whereas, while, as for, in regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40331491713 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76287289282 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602209944751 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5554975304 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.25 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212572336539 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891167682836 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816353326636 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142934315185 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084050595104 0.0819641961636 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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