The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries

Essay topics:

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in 6 countries.

The table shows the three types of data (date opened, kilometers per route and millions of passengers per year) about metro systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
Overall, the oldest underground railway belongs to London and Paris with both of them having also the longest route systems. Kyoto and Los Angeles have the youngest and shortest metro systems with the least number of passengers per year. Furthermore, the most used metro belongs to Tokyo.
With regard to the age of the underground railway systems, the two oldest were established in 1863 and 1900 in London and Paris, respectively. On the other hand, Kyoto and Los Angeles railway systems were built almost 100 years later in 1981 and 2001, making them the youngest metro systems.
The longest metro system belongs to the city of London with almost 400 kilometers of railway with Paris and Tokyo having less than half of the length (199 and 155 kilometers). The shortest railway system is only 11 kilometers long and located in Kyoto.
Tokyo’s metro is the most used one with 1927 million passengers each year whereas Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles are the least used underground railway systems with 144, 45 and 50 million passengers per year individually.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, so, whereas, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4367044024 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485714285714 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7006453916 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163538254779 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798941094153 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350955266009 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104856533194 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150829192411 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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