The charts blow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts blow show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The six pie charts reveal the proportion of water consumed by three purposes in six different areas of the world. Overall, it is obvious that the water used for agricultural aim represents the largest percentage in four of these areas including South America, Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia, whereas that for industry takes up the greatest pattern in the rest districts.

For Asian and African areas, the most conspicuous thing is that they share the similar figures for agricultural water consumption: South East Asia takes up 81% of its overall water consumption, Africa 84% of that and Central Asia 88% of that. By contrast, the other purposes remain relatively insignificant, with industrial use only accounts 9% in Africa, 7% in both Asian districts. However, the domestic water use in South East Asia (12%) takes a bit more than its industrial use.

As to the rest areas, the largest water used for industrial purpose appears in European nations, taking up more than half of its whole consumption (53%), and it was followed by North America (48%). Besides, these two areas have almost the same domestic figure, accounting 15% and 13% respectively in Europe and North America. In comparison, water used by individuals shows a larger proportion in South American with 19% of all three purposes.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, whereas, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06018518519 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7070588961 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.9561037343 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.625 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223830203871 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1111367957 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763857206891 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168688583235 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625683390995 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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