The charts give information about the amount of exports millions of tonnes moving through Rotterdam port in Holland to various global destinations in 2002 and 2012 and also the rates of tax imposed on these exports by the receiving countries Write a repor

Essay topics:

The charts give information about the amount of exports (millions of tonnes) moving through Rotterdam port in Holland to various global destinations in 2002 and 2012; and also the % rates of tax imposed on these exports by the receiving countries. Write a report summarizing the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables indicates information about the volume of exports (units are measured in tonnes), transporting through Rotterdam port in Holland to different destinations in 2002 and 2012, as well as the percent rates of the tax imposed on these exports by the receiving countries.
As is observed, Holland imported most of their commodities to Europe and USA with 6900 and 4200 millions of tonnes, respectively in the year 2002. However, it slightly decreased in the year 2012 to 6400 and 3900, respectively. Ironically, the region Asia Pacific and Australasia increased their imports from 800 and 700, to 2550 and 2300, respectively. Ultimately, we can see that Holland exported 18600 millions of tonnes good in total.
Regarding to the percent of tax imposition, it is obvious that tax imposed on the goods of USA and Latin America fluctuated between 1% to 3% during the years 2002 to 2012. Initially, in 2002 taxation was not required, however, after ten years it has imposed 2% of taxation on the goods. As a Europe, tax increased with 3% from 5% to 8%, while it is plunging down with 3% in both Asia Pacific and Australasia.
Overall, both of two tables illustrates the definite connection between the amount of exports moving through Rotterdam port in Holland as well as the percentage of taxation imposed by destination of countries in ten years.

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Average: 8.7 (5 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'indicate'.
Suggestion: indicate
The tables indicates information about the volume of exports...
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Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '4200 million'.
Suggestion: 4200 million
...odities to Europe and USA with 6900 and 4200 millions of tonnes, respectively in the year 2002. ...
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Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '18600 million'.
Suggestion: 18600 million
...ately, we can see that Holland exported 18600 millions of tonnes good in total. Regarding to th...
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Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...oving through Rotterdam port in Holland as well as the percentage of taxation imposed by d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97787610619 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87687191985 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544247787611 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6943363843 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374854767276 0.215688989381 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134850873963 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145301902155 0.0843802449381 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242497230883 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152246688026 0.0819641961636 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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