The charts show school expenditure and the proportion of students who gained
higher education diplomas and degrees in Singapore from 2000 to 2012.
A glance at the diagrams reveal the total spending on boys and girls schools and the percentage of students in higher education who attained diplomas and degrees in Singapore in the timeframe of 12 years, from 2000 to 2012. Overall, it is evident that the total expenditure on school for boys was substantially higher than that of girls. It can be also observed that more students achieved higher education diplomas compared with those who were awarded degrees.
Looking at the bar chart, there was an upward trend in the total school spending on girls and boys schools. In 2000, a total of approximately $10 millions was spent on boys schools , which was merely higher than that of girls schools at roughly $8 millions. While the figure for boys schools witnessed a considerable rise from exactly $ 20 millions to reach a peak of $32 millions in 2012, the spending on girls schools plateaued at over $10 millions between 2004 and 2008 and then continued to climb to $20 millions at the end of the period.
Turning to the second chart, the proportion of students obtaining diplomas in 2000 was 73%, which was higher than that of graduates with degrees (27%). After 12 years, the figure for diplomas suffered a mild decline to 68% as opposed to a 5% increase seen in the percentage of students who graduated with degrees.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ely 0 millions was spent on boys schools , which was merely higher than that of gi...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er than that of girls schools at roughly millions. While the figure for boys scho...
^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...nessed a considerable rise from exactly $ 20 millions to reach a peak of 2 millions ...
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Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to reach a peak of 2 millions in 2012, the spending on girls schools plateaued ...
^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plomas in 2000 was 73%, which was higher than that of graduates with degrees 27%....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78854625551 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316221897 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.66403125 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353937084369 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164339173877 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103348201496 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254039419296 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115594730952 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ely 0 millions was spent on boys schools , which was merely higher than that of gi...
^^
Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er than that of girls schools at roughly millions. While the figure for boys scho...
^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$20'.
Suggestion: $20
...nessed a considerable rise from exactly $ 20 millions to reach a peak of 2 millions ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to reach a peak of 2 millions in 2012, the spending on girls schools plateaued ...
^^
Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plomas in 2000 was 73%, which was higher than that of graduates with degrees 27%....
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 227.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78854625551 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60316221897 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.66403125 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.875 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.375 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353937084369 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164339173877 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103348201496 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254039419296 0.15604864568 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115594730952 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.