The diagram below shows the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.
The depicted pictorial enumerates the difference that has carried out at Queen Mary Hospital since its opening in 1960.
Overall, the Queen Mary Hospital was completely transformed with the establishment of various development infrastructure. However, the Hospital and the Car park was not altered.
To initiate, over the period, the area witnessed dramatic changes alike, the shopping center was split in 1960 which was replaced by a cancer center and pharmacy in 1980. The farmland in 1960 seems to have demolished and developed a Nursing school in 1980. In addition, the hospital and the car park was not changed for over twenty years.
Furthermore, from 1980 to 2000, the Queen Mary Hospital saw spectacular developments. Cancer center was renovated and had extended the area in 2000 by removing the nursery school. Moreover, a new nursery school was built next to the cancer center by demolishing half part of the car park. Surprisingly, pharmacy and hospital, as well as half part of the car park, was not modernized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tal and the Car park was not altered. To initiate, over the period, the area w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22155688623 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88173924877 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562874251497 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4531831896 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195388607354 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888769942883 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916892281993 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154163722307 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100894667274 0.0819641961636 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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