The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroleectric power plant.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroleectric power plant.

The diagram given illustrates the method of electricity generation in a hydroelectric power plant.

First of all, water from a river is accumulated in a high-level reservoir which is guarded by a dam. Under the dam there is an intake, which is open during daytime and closed at night. In daytime, the water leaves the high-level reservoir and flows through the intake that carries the water to the reversible turbines, which are located in a power station. In the power station, there is a generator that is connected with the turbines, which generates electricity. The generator is connected with power lines through which it transmits electricity to the national grid.

The water that is discharged from the turbine goes to a low-level reservoir at daytime during operation. At night, water from the low-level reservoir is pumped back to the high-level reservoir again through the intake. The whole process is repeated the same way.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19607843137 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84631330378 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2409987036 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155983261989 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0879023591279 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128347796685 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170905995653 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161492118607 0.0819641961636 197% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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