The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The schematic illustrates the theory of operation of Geothermal plants in general. So, the main principle is converting thermal energy on earth into electrical power through heating water. Generally, electrical production using Geothermal process depends mainly on water as the heating transfer element. Firstly, cold water is pumped down deep into the ground by means of pipes of 4.5 km vertical length. Subsequently, water reaches the injection well area, where evaporating process starts in the Geothermal zone, which consists of rocks of high temperatures. Next, vapor is pumped up from the production well through pipes of the same length as the one used with injection well. When the vapor reaches the condenser, it is pressurized and redirected at the turbine acting as its prime mover. This steam has not only high pressure but also very high temperature. Thus, thermal energy is turned into mechanical energy. The turbine’s shaft is the same shaft of the electrical generator, that -in turn- transforms mechanical energy into electricity. Finally, the output electrical power is connected to the grid via overhead transmission lines, that deliver electricity to consumers.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, so, thus, well, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48633879781 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91942415816 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644808743169 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2921593554 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2727272727 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100867469847 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038586798262 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350844549769 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100867469847 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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