The diagram below shows the water cycle which is the continuous movement of water on above and below the surface of the Earth

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the water cycle, which is the continuous movement of
water on, above and below the surface of the Earth

The chart illustrates the circulation of water in nature.

Overall, it is clear that there are three main stages in this process, beginning with the
evaporation of water and the formation of a cloud.. The next step shows the water‘s
journey after falling to the ground and the process ends with salt water intrusion.

At the first step of the process, as a result of the sun ‘s heat, water evaporates into
the air. It is estimated that 80% of total water vapour is taken from the ocean.
Following this, a cloud is formed by the condensation of water vapour.

In the next stage, the heavy clouds cause rain or snow. Water from the precipitation
partly pours into the lakes or can be absorbed into the ground. The surface runoff
which is made from rainwater creates the groundwater and then flows back to the
ocean without reaching the impervious layer. The final stage of the process is the
salt water intrusion where water from the ocean moves to the freshwater aquifers

Votes
Average: 9.3 (3 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...on of water and the formation of a cloud.. The next step shows the water's j...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88304093567 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49739784551 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9319589127 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120369508076 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508635198781 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259192737446 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478281689287 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033689212909 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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