In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (e.g. Languages) and boys choose science subjects (e.g. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed?
It is believed that girls have a tendency to enroll in art classes while boys prefer attending science classes. This trend is caused by some reasons and should be made a change.
The tendency to choose subjects following their gender is based on some reasons. The first one is that the choice of subject reflects gender specific characteristics. In terms of the portrayal of women, they are better at expressing themselves and appreciate the aesthetic qualities of works of art so that they will be high-flyers as art students. While men are generally more logical, hence, they have a better grasp of analytical subjects such as math, physics. Secondly, students are bombarded by traditional conception that art subjects are for girls and science subjects suit for men. For instance, men hesitate to study literature because it is believed that literature is not born for men and out of their depth, therefore, they are likely to fall behind their peers.
However, it is necessary to have an immediate alteration. If pupils were forced to study subjects that are not their favorite ones due to social perception, it would be responsible for the lack of young people’s interest in studying. In the long run, this habit could cause students’ negative attitude about school because they don’t make the grade for their subjects. In addition, should people make a change for this tendency, students are more likely to have a chance to be at liberty to follow their beloved subjects. As a result, society might be able to eradicate gender discrimination about choosing courses and encourage young people to pursue their passion.
In conclusion, the tendency to attend classes at school of students based on gender is due to some reasons including particular characteristics and traditional perception, and people should have a alteration for this issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19141914191 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88513786861 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521452145215 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9461858201 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194574448983 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768913055822 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507814487543 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131575947664 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396986020654 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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