Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is true that taking up exercises plays an important role in our life. While it is argued that extreme exercises should be outlawed by government legislation, I believe that it is personal right to choose what types of sports they would like to take part in.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why the government should impose an official ban to extreme sports on safety ground. The first one is that dangerous sports can involve various unpredictable risks which could put players in jeopardy. If participants were not at the peak of condition or equipped by necessary experience, they wouldn’t know how to deal with unforeseeable problems. Secondly, the practice of extreme exercise may carry detrimental impacts on the real life. For example, a number of accidents were resulted by car-racers who had a tendency to break traffic rules due to their obsession with high speed.
On the other hand, we shouldn’t infringe people’s choice of the activities they are interested in because of several reasons. Firstly, there are a wide range of essential sports gear which deprive players of life-threatening situation. Such equipment ranges from safety ropes and helmets to water-resistant clothing. Secondly, thanks to imposition of safety rules in some extreme exercises, people can minimize the risks of accidents and injuries. Therefore, participants could make sure that they are under safe control with the support of experienced and qualified instructors.
In conclusion, while it is necessary for people to adhere to the safety rules, it seems to me that it is personal freedom to practice extreme activities.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30534351145 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04754202313 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6854628959 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146003741606 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046530809986 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527133534582 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883870952649 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0093776081421 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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