The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
The pictures illustrate how to make frozen fish pies with four main ingredients including potato, fish, sauce, and peas.
In general, it can be seen that there are multiple stages in the process of producing frozen fish pies, beginning with the preparation of all ingredients and ending with the finished products being stored and dispatched.
The potato processing procedure commences when the delivery trucks arrive at the factory after about 1 month. Then, the potatoes are cleaned and peeled on their skin before being cut to be boiled in hot water. After that, the boiled potatoes are chilled and stored so that they are ready to prepare for the main food.
Besides, the fresh salmon and the assembling process begins with the 12-hour transporting of fish to the cooking area. The salmon fish are added with lemon juice and salt, before being put in the steam oven. Subsequently, these fish are removed skin and bones and then inspected. Regarding the assembling, the peas and sauce are prepared and wrapped with other ingredients, followed by being sent to the frozen area to be stored and delivered to the market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, regarding, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98936170213 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47053711654 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8628614808 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129359435639 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569516473818 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526939652576 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092927370417 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607450608272 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.