The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
The diagrams depict the circle of life of a salmon from its' eggs stage till adulthood.
Overall, a salmon's life cycle takes about ten years to fully mature from their hatching period, and they spend their lives in three distinct locations – lower river, open sea, and upper river.
First of all, the salmon eggs can be found underneath small stones under the reeds in the upper part of the river. After about 5-6 months, they become a small size fish named a fry, and their length grows about 3-8cm. Once they become a fry, they migrate to the lower part of the river for further nourishment, where the water current is fast. They settle there as their habitat about four years before growing into smolts with a length of 12-15cm long.
In the second phase of their life, they experience approximately five years of living in the open sea. In the final stage of the cycle, the smolts develop into mature fish, with sizes ranging around 70-76cm, called an adult salmon. The adults then again swim to the upper river and lay eggs to start a new cycle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
... stage till adulthood. Overall, a salmons life cycle takes about ten years to ful...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66137566138 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.97975532502 2.65546596893 75% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608465608466 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5316811093 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136077569986 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582652352339 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570478613025 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102002015269 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476270646322 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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