The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The maps compare several differences in a school in 2004 and 2024.
Overall, the school will accept more students to attend in 2024. More building and car park will be built in the future plan.
The number of students is expected to grow from 600 to 1000 in the next 20 years. Besides, school building 1 and 2 are going to stay the same place, but they will have the conjunction that goes across the main path. School building 3 is going to replace the old sports field while the new one will be constructed in the southeast of the new road.
The main entrance and the old car park at the west will stay the same old site in 2024. Besides, the new car park is predicted to build on the east side of these buildings. The original road will not be changed in the future while the new road going to be built to connect the new car park with the main entrance.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stay the same old site in 2024. Besides, the new car park is predicted to build o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24848484848 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11474338339 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49696969697 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9481032603 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161821979715 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789537482146 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739312779382 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127661177952 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679509717805 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.37 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 40.7170731707 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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