The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram illustrates how the equipment is used to produce cement to make concrete for building purposes.
At first glance, there are two main types of production for two distinct products which are cement and concrete. While creating cement includes various stages in total, concrete production has one stage only.
To begin with making cement, limestone and clay first go through crushers to become power. Secondly, the crushed limestone and clay are mixed together and poured into a pipe from a mixer to a rotating heater. At that part, the combination between powder of limestone and clay is heated at a high temperature. Then, it is put in a grinder and finally becomes cement. To deliver it to construction sites easily, that amount of cement is packaged in bags.
Turning to the concrete process, it has a mixture of four ingredients, which are cement, water, sand, and gravel, at 15%, 10%, 25%, and 50% respectively. After putting it into the concrete mixer, this machine is controlled to continually rotate to make the final product become more effective.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, secondly, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68283663978 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0353605698 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340229157991 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136592011814 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.172669720276 0.0843802449381 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257346217448 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.21739479778 0.0819641961636 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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