the diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
There are two different diagrams which first shows how cement was produced and its prototype, continue to it, concrete which was produced from cement.
Based on the first diagram, cement production consists of six stages namely, crushing, mixing, rotating, heating, grinding and packaging. At the first step, limestone and clay turn to powder by crusher. Produced powder immediately is mixed and go through rota-tor which is heated from the bottom. Outcome will be grinned to be prepare for packaging. In the last stage bag is full of cement.
Produced cement, water, sand and gravel will be enter the mixer by these proportion: 15%-10%-25%-50%. Finally, the concrete mixer mix them all and produce concrete.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 600.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 113.0 196.424390244 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30973451327 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 3.73543355544 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67991137438 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699115044248 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 172.8 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.563071959 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.125 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261267191571 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101038011039 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783045201818 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174834496609 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568199166734 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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