During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
Remind him when and where you met
Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Robin
Hope you are doing well. We had met on our flight from Paris to New Delhi on the 15th of March. I must say, thanks to your company those 9 hours passed by like a blink of eye. I am writing this letter with regard to the possible job opening you had mentioned in one of your restaurants in Mumbai.
As was mentioned earlier, I have done my MBA in finance and marketing and have had a work experience as a manager for over 9 years with a hotel in New Delhi. My role as a manager here involves to ensure that all the guests are well taken care of and to monitor that the employees are doing their work as is expected from them. I am responsible for any customer complaints or grievances that may arise. Therefore it would be highly appreciated if you could offer me a similar profile at your restaurant.
Since it has been almost a decade working at the current place, I was any way looking for a change of job. Mumbai being my birth place, my entire family is based there and thus am more than willing to relocate to the city. My past work experience would also prove beneficial at the job considering the fact that it is almost the same line of business.
I would be eagerly waiting for a positive response.
Yours Sincerely
Vrinda
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at all the guests are well taken care of and to monitor that the employees are do...
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Line 5, column 404, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...omplaints or grievances that may arise. Therefore it would be highly appreciated if you c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, therefore, thus, well, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 235.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37021276596 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40399546703 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3075524473 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099899332749 0.215688989381 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392824505326 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593357983497 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055895917691 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065208730749 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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