Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The next generation of human population across the globe is going to face numerous issues ranging from climate change, population, pollution, exhaustion of various resources, epidemic diseases and so much more. In this essay, we will discuss about the problems that India will go through in the coming ten years and also how we can overcome these.
The time ahead of us is going to be a very difficult one. India is a developing country and the growing population is one of the major challenges that the country is currently facing. As per the census 2017, the rise in population since the year 2011 is an alarming 30%. The other cause of concern is the scarcity of potable water across the nation. India has largely been dependent upon the monsoons for fulfilling its demand for drinking water. With environmental changes throughout the world, the level of rainfall recorded has dropped manifold. Mumbai had witnessed a mere 360 mm of rainfall in the year 2018 vis –a- vis an average of 620 mm over the last ten years.
It is therefore obvious that without execution of proper strategies and steps these issues are going to grow worse. Firstly, the government needs to spread awareness and educate citizens in both rural as well as urban areas about family planning. Secondly, Special privileges may be extended to the only child in the family, which might in turn encourage couples to not bear more than one child. In order to address to the problem of reducing water levels, we need to reduce our dependency on ground water. Established companies should undertake research activities and look for alternative resources of potable water like sea water.
In the conclusion, both population explosion and water shortages will turn out to be of great concern to the entire country in the next ten years and to deal with them awareness on family planning and search of new methods to prepare potable water is crucial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...ness and educate citizens in both rural as well as urban areas about family planning. Seco...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amily planning and search of new methods to prepare potable water is crucial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91717791411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56560757002 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610429447853 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1127500983 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255247895447 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066636361364 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597498298373 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144933924407 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465054283939 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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