Eating sweet foods produces acid in the mouth, which can cause tooth decay. (High acid levels are measured by low pH values)
Describe the information below and discuss the implications for dental health.
The graph illustrates the acid level of 3 type of sweet food when consumed and kept in mouth. Sweet foods can cause tooth decay and from the graph, it is shown what happens to teeth as the duration of keeping the sweet food in mouth increases.
Fruit sugar, Cane sugar and Honey has a starting acid level (pH) of 7 at the moment of consumption. Fruit sugar has the highest drop in pH at the first 5 minute mark. The pH level goes to 3.5 which is well below the acid level at which tooth decay occurs. It slowly rises above risk levels after 30 minutes and at the 40th minute mark, it reaches the highest pH level.
Cane sugar also faces a drop in the pH level in the first 5 minutes but not as low as Fruit sugar. 5th minute acid level of Cane sugar is slightly above 4 and it goes above the risk level at the 20th minute mark. From there, it slowly goes to pH level 7 at 35 minutes and stays at the same level till 40 mins.
Honey has the lowest acid level drop after it is consumed in the first 5 minute. The acid level is at 5 at that time. From 5 to 10 minute, it shows no change in acid level but after 5 minutes, it increases steadily. It crosses the decay level at the 12-13th minute which is the fastest among the 3 food types. It rises to pH level 7 at the 25th minute which is also faster than the other 2 food types shown in the graph.
In conclusion, we can see that honey causes the most damage in the least amount of time to teeth, then fruit sugar and the healthier among these 3 is fruit sugar.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 301.0 196.424390244 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.05315614618 4.92477711251 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94270079496 2.65546596893 73% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418604651163 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9635786616 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3333333333 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264384720826 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121700203852 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075350663441 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168527746209 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847305188191 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.21 11.4140731707 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.52 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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