The figures five information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories

Essay topics:

The figures five information about economic growth and household expenditure across a range of categories.

The line graph presents changes in economic growth whereas the pie charts analyze domestic spending for a range of items with 5-year intervals from 1995 to 2010.

Overall, it can seen that changes in economic development seemed to influence expenditure on a range of categories.

Firstly, from 1995 to 2000, the economy experienced a short initial rise to peak at the 2.5% mark in the first two years before fluctuating and ending at a comparable spot. While spending on clothing, entertainment, travel and other activities remained the same, food acquired a growth in household expenditure, reducing the budget for housing from nearly one third to just a little over one fourth.

In the next 5 years, economic growth fluctuated to a smaller degree and reached the all-time high at around 4.8% in 2005. This upward change correlated with the rise in spending on housing, clothing, entertaiment and travel while that on other activities remained the same and the figure for food was reduced to a little less than 25%.

Lastly, from 2005 to 2010, the economy suffered a net fall of 4 percent, with the lowest point being at -5% in 2008. Spending on essentialfood rose to 30% while the figures of less essential items such as clothing, entertainment and travel were all reduced.

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Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...8. Spending on essentialfood rose to 30% while the figures of less essential item...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, lastly, third, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02803738318 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74910954386 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598130841121 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5044364854 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148693038639 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695209425897 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690878199859 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976770065093 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696334374263 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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