The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The two charts illustrate proportions of energy use and greenhouse gas emissions by various sources in an average Australian household.

Overall, the most striking feature is that the percentage of gas emissions tends to be larger than that of energy utilization for most sources, with the exception of heating. Also, it is noticeable that cooling and lighting have the smallest figures in both charts.

Regarding energy consumption, heating accounts for the vast bulk of energy consumption (over 40%), followed by water heating at 30%. Other appliances typically consumed 15% of total energy, which is more than double the amount used by refrigeration. Energy consumption by cooling and lighting is negligible.

By contrast, turning to domestic emissions of greenhouse gas, while water heating is the main source, taking up about one-third of the total emitted amount, the figure for heating stands at only 15%. Other appliances are responsible for over one-fourth of all emissions combined and refrigeration makes up for half that. The proportions for cooling and lighting remain significantly smaller, making up for 3% and 8%, respectively.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...of energy utilization for most sources, with the exception of heating. Also, it is noticeable that co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52542372881 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99293218739 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7355455511 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211365324632 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958314482041 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128601137217 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174321992625 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160933821918 0.0819641961636 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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