The given diagram shows the natural water purification system.
The described diagram illustrates the information about the natural water purification system through condensation method which is clearly and coherently represented.
As is clear from the diagram that, there is a trench which placed under mud as well as it was covered with plastic sheets so that light falls on it directly. The next step was to place 3 Stones in a plastic sheet for protection. No, a container had been placed at centre of trench because after condensation pure water was collected in this container.
Following this, for the completion of process there was some plants around the container. when light falls, transpiration took place and, One stone was at centre because from their water was collected in the container. Lastly, water had been collected in the container which was safe and pure for drinking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...e was some plants around the container. when light falls, transpiration took place a...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 136.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78291096257 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8905802336 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146095157967 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0743693274099 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103951566895 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142454280661 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127850312934 0.0819641961636 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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