The given line chart demonstrates the consumption of three spreads, during the period of 1981 to 2007.

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The given line chart demonstrates the consumption of three spreads, during the period of 1981 to 2007.

The given line chart demonstrates the consumption of three spreads, during the period of 1981 to 2007.

Overall, it is evident from the figure that the consumption of Butter increased till 1986, then after it started falling drastically while the usage of Margarine dropped till 1986 and then trend went upward for some period but after that, it started dipping significantly. Another noticeable thing was the consumption of Lowfat & reduced spreads increased in between from 1996 to 2001 and then it went down.

Firstly, the usage of Butter from approximately 145 grams in 1981 to 155 grams in 1986, thereafter it plunged rapidly till 2007 and settled finally to 50 grams. Additionally, the usage of Margarine went down moderately from 1981 to 1986, from 90 grams to 80 grams respectively. After 1986, though it showed recovery and remained flat for some duration past 1996 it started to fall.

Turning to the consumption of Lowfat and reduced spreads its consumption was visible after 1996 at 10 grams and it was growing till 2001 but this trend reversed after this period, as thereafter it rested at 70 grams in 2007 compared to 85 grams in 2001.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6720655407 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515463917526 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8579175659 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.571428571 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246187389946 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184209193823 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.334132974534 0.0843802449381 396% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301932266208 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.403309616399 0.0819641961636 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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