The illustrations depicted through the graph and table display the changing patterns of weather across three major cities. The graph points to average monthly temperatures varying in oscillations. The table, on the other hand, shows the difference in total hours of sunshine for the cities of London, New York and Sydney annually.
From the line graph, it can be observed that while London and New York show a rise in monthly temperatures from April to August, Sydney is a stark contrast to this observed trend. As opposed to the two major cities, the average temperatures recorded in Sydney decreased during the first half of the year followed by an increase in the latter half. This trend suggests that the weather patterns of London and New York are different from from Sydney.
However the tabulation of hours of sunshine received by the three cities paints a different picture. While New York and Sydney record higher numbers, London recorded less than half of the daylight in the former cities. This can be attributed to the fact that the highest average temperatures of London is lesser compared to that of New York and Sydney.
It is therefore accurate to assume that though Sydney displays an opposite trend in temperatures, the annual weather patterns is closer to New York than London. To further conclude, New York emerges as the hottest city among the three with high monthly average temperature and maximum annual hours of sunshine.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, therefore, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04149377593 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56693255636 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49377593361 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 368.1 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6448598955 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188523719824 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923089970004 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658496879937 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14018867015 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635632554474 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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