The graph and the table show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in the three major cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The Line graph shown here depicts the trends in the temperatures in 3 important places whereas the table helps us to understand the average sunshine received in these cities every year.
Overall, it is safe to say from the line chart that New York and London have a similar type of weather with the exception of Sydney. Moreover, it can be deduced that New York experiences sunlight for maximum hours among all 3 cities.
In the line chart, we see that in New York and London portray similar trends in temperature. In winter New York dips down to 5 degrees whereas London's temperature falls down only to 10 degrees. After a gradual increase of almost 5 to 4 degrees every month the temperature reaches up to 29 degrees and 24 degrees for New York and London respectively. Sydney experiences a steady and mild climate at 25 degrees from mid of November to Mid of March. From March it begins dipping till July till 15 degrees, only to rise again steadily till November.
Furthermore, in the table, we see that that New York and Sydney bask in more than twice the hours of sunlight as London. London experiences only 1180 hours of sunlight which is relatively lower than 2535 hours in New York and 2473 hours in Sydney.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...d London have a similar type of weather with the exception of Sydney. Moreover, it can be deduced tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63133640553 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51659319498 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7617801953 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917569952293 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393329423506 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594067656656 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765793338523 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761191947668 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 104, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...d London have a similar type of weather with the exception of Sydney. Moreover, it can be deduced tha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63133640553 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51659319498 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7617801953 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917569952293 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393329423506 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594067656656 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765793338523 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761191947668 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.