The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista
Cafe, by season.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.
The rendered bar graph illustrates the average daily sales of five different food items namely Hot coffee, Iced coffee, Ice cream, Soup, Salad at the Vista Café, especially during Summer and Winter. Overall, Hot coffee and Soup were sold with the significantly increased sales margin in Winter as that of Summer. However, Iced coffee had taken its highest proportional difference in sales in summer comparing to Winter.
In Winter, the maximal daily sales of approximately 78 servings were taken by Hot coffee, followed by Soup with the usual servings of 50 per day. Both Ice cream and Salad were sold in 28 servings per day. However, Iced coffee had taken the least sales category with almost less than 2 servings sold each day.
Moreover, in Summer, Iced coffee had shown its opposite trend as that of Winter, taken the highest servings of 40 per day, followed by Ice cream with the marginal difference between them. Both Soup and Salad were in equal proportions. In both the seasons, no variations of sales were seen in Salad.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...in in Winter as that of Summer. However, Iced coffee had taken its highest propor...
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...in sales in summer comparing to Winter. In Winter, the maximal daily sales of ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92571428571 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44538048456 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.6873315902 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0782937819293 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0374489493292 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495058374912 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583745375322 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472150083813 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.