The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the country Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The charts below show agricultural production in two different regions of the
country.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

The Pie chart represents the production of various agricultural products in eastern and western parts of a country. Two regions of the country produces variety of agricultural products.

In Eastern region, Large proportion of production is obtained from cattles which averages about 65% of the production. For instance, first largest is meat with 35% of agricultural production, followed by the second largest contributor - dairy products which averages about 30% of production. Vegetables and grain has a share of 20% and 15% respectively.

In Western region, Single largest production is from the grains that accounts for 45% of production, followed by meat and dairy with 35% and 15% respectively in the production. Vegetables are by far the least which makes up only 5% among other products.

In general, Farming products produced in the country shows that Eastern region is dominated by cattle based products but western region has equal share of both cattle reared products and plant based products.

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Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, for instance, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41772151899 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92452153918 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8144224613 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190689054448 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931490615091 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707807010213 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13739646924 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771387578587 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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