The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe by season Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Cafe, by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph illustrates the average of everyday sales of several food items at the Vista Café during winter and summer.

In general, the demand of several products during winter are similar. On the other hand, the discrepancy of demand between hot coffee and iced coffee are very large.

During winter, hot coffee reaches the highest demand, with more than 75 items sold on daily average. Besides, daily sales for soup, ice cream, and salad are 50, 26, and 25 portion, respectively. People are not interested to consume iced coffee during winter, as it can be seen that it is less than 5 servings every day. Conversely, iced coffee is quite popular during hot season, which is bought around 40 cups per day. In addition, the consumption for ice cream, hot coffee, are 35 and 30 cups, whereas soup and salad share the same number of items sold, 25 portions.

To sum up, people like to purchase more hot coffee on cold days and consume less iced coffee on hot days in the Vista Cafe.

Votes
Average: 7.1 (13 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d coffee on hot days in the Vista Cafe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, conversely, so, whereas, in addition, in general, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69142857143 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22912813559 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588571428571 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9516865687 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.2222222222 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972880090117 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480665456945 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661769317759 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081096731908 0.15604864568 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855097208352 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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