The graph below shows the levels of education of democrat and republican voters in the USA.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the levels of education of democrat and republican voters in the USA.

The graph compares education which holds Democrats and Republicans voters in the United States.

Most voters are college graduates, have received some college diploma or at least holds high school diploma. Just very small amount of voters have not finished high school. Relatively speaking, the ones who hold postgraduate diploma does not contain big proportion of voters also.

The biggest disparity in this chart is between people who holds postgraduate diploma, by around 4 percent difference, democrats receives around 21 percent while Republicans around 17 %. In addition, Democrats is more popular between people without high school diploma with 4% voters agains 2% voters for Republicans. While the most votes Republicans gets from people holding high school diploma (22%), some college (30%) and college graduates (30%). Accordingly democrats are less popular within these levels of education, some college and college graduates equally votes goes by 3% less to democrats. High school graduates votes splits the most equally between parties with approximately 22 percent.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es not contain big proportion of voters also. The biggest disparity in this chart...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Accordingly,
... college 30% and college graduates 30%. Accordingly democrats are less popular within these...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, so, while, at least, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66049382716 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62572386869 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2680842866 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.888888889 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178935661541 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921991646568 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10114258884 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182515392127 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127513047553 0.0819641961636 156% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 11.4140731707 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.