The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.»

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The graph below shows the number of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between 1980 and 1996.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
» Write at least 150 words.

The given line graph illustrates the number of complaints received by the Environmental Health Department according to the type of noises heard in the city of Newtown from 1980 to 1996.

Although the main reason for noise complaints was domestic or household problems at the starting point of researching time but 16 years later, the authorities got the largest amount of criticisms in relation to the road work.

In 1980, the authorities received the greatest number of complaints with over 600 times concerning domestic and household disturbances. The smallest number of complaints was 300 which caused by traffic noise. Regarding factories and road work, the Newtown residents presented their dissatisfaction about commotions with 400 and 450 times respectively.

During the period of 16 years, the figure for domestic and household steadily decreased and reached the lowest point of 70. Beginning with 500 in 1980, the number of complaints in regard to the noise of road work remained stable between 1980 and 1984, slightly declined from 1984 to 1988 before experiencing a dramatic rise to the peak of approximately 1200 times over the next 8years. On the other hand, the number of complaints about heavy industries steeply increased six years on, since that time it remained reasonably stable during the next 10 years. The last noticeable thing, the number of complaints caused by traffic noise stabilized in four years until it plummeted to a low point of 200 till 1988, then it and continued to incline steadily until the end of 1996.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, then, in regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18725099602 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82325386192 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553784860558 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3393571018 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.666666667 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230205627445 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984142195624 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765715755448 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159604108452 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799004612461 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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