The graph below shows the number of new homes built in a particular region in the UK from 2010 and the figure predicted for 2020

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the number of new homes built in a particular region in the UK from 2010 and the figure predicted for 2020

The line graph illustrates how many accommodations were constructed in a specific area in the UK from 2010 and expected to 2020.
It seems evident that the number of apartments is more likely to increase significantly in the future. While the figures of the three remaining types of houses are expected to witness negative patterns until 2020.
In 2010, the highest quantity of homes in this region was detached houses, which represented for 2700. Despite some fluctuations, the number of detached houses stayed remain until 2018, before predicted to decrease to under 2500 homes by 2020. Meanwhile, Rising from 1800 to around 1900 in the first two years, the figure of Terraced house is expected to witness a gradual decline to 1500 until 2020.
There were some striking differences between the number of new homes between the semi-detached house and flat. Standing at exactly 1500 homes in 2010, the figure of the former is forecasted to fall to around 1000 homes by 2020. On the contrary, a dramatic elevation is expected in the number of the latter, from around 1300 to reach the highest peak at 3000 until 2020.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o increase significantly in the future. While the figures of the three remaining type...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92592592593 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62656715415 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560846560847 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 18.2438895571 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324297847395 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124292186756 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483649513165 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184532246707 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560414004809 0.0819641961636 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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