The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph demonstrates the percentage of people aged 65 and over in three particular countries from 1940 to 2019, and projected percentage to 2040.
According to the given data, the proportion of elderly people showed an upward trend in each country between 1940 to 2040. japan is expected to be the highest elderly population throughout this period.
In 1940, the percentage of people aged 65 or over in America were about 9%, compared to the 7% of Swedish people and 5% of japanese people. over 80 years, the proportion of aged people in USA and Sweden increased to approximately 15% and 19% respectively. By contrast, the percentage of elder in japan was below 10%.
After 100 years, it is predicted that the percentage of japanese elderly will grow markedly, with about 25% in 2030. By 2040, it is thought that around 27% of the japanese population will be 65 years old or more, while the figures for Sweden and USA will be slightly lower, with about 25% and 23%.
In conclusion, there have been a noticeable discrepancy in population age 65 and over by each country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Japan
...d in each country between 1940 to 2040. japan is expected to be the dominant elderly ...
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Suggestion: Over
...edish people and 5% of japanese people. over 80 years, the proportion of aged people...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82887700535 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7280275772 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540106951872 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8132124078 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326424205412 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12793625309 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866549494393 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183089725688 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725174122442 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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