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The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
THE DIAGRAMS ILLUSTRATE A MODEL OF A WAVE-ENERGY MACHINE AND ITS PROPER PLACEMENT.
OVERALL, ENERGY PRODUCED BY WAVES FOLLOWED A SIMPLE PROCESS OF AIR FLOWS. TO SUCCESSFULLY USE THIS MACHINE, IT IS LOCATED IN AREAS WITH PRECISE DISTANCE FROM EACH OTHER.
THE MACHINE IS COMPOSED OF ELECTRICITY GENERATOR, TURBINES AND METAL CHAMBERS. THE AIR ENTERS A SMALL OPENNINGS THEN GOING DOWN THE TURBINES WHICH DIRECTS IT DOWN TO THE WATER. THE WATER INSITE THE MACHINE INCREASES AS IT IS PUSHED BY THE WAVES. TO CONTINUE, THE PRESSURE FROM THE WAVES PUSHES THE AIR TO FLOW UPWARD THE TURBINES AND RELEASED TO THE ENVIRONMENT.
THE WAVE-ENERGY MACHINES ARE PLACED IN TWO OPTIONS DEPENDING ON THE WAVES OUTPUT. A LOW INSTILLATION COSTS MACHINE IS PUT IN THE SHORE LINE WHERE SMALL WAVES ARE PRESENT WHICH PRODUCE SMALL OUTPUT. A LARGER WAVE-ENERGY MACHINE IS LOCATED DISTANT FROM THE SHORE IN DEEP WATERS WHERE WAVES ARE LARGER THAT CAN GIVE HIGH OUTPUT.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 178, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06329113924 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64068958185 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575949367089 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.244739541 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.0 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137768065925 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625563330968 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514516239494 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977823203925 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541920506914 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.