The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The given graph chart reveals the information about the demand for electricity in England during the days in winter , and summer. The pie chart also describe the electricity used in an average English home. The data is celebrated in per centum .
It can be seen that the 18000 units of electricity in England at the time of summer. The very less demand of electricity in summer as compare to winter. In winter the 42000 units of electricity used. In this pie chart gives the information relate to the electricity in winter which purpose are used in houses of England.
The most use of electricity in England in winter. The 52.5% of electricity are used for heating the room , and also for the heating water also. The 17.5% of electricity are used for ovens , kettles , and also the washing machine purpose. The 15% electricity used for the lighting , TV , radio , and also the same proportion of electricity are used for vacuum cleaner , food mixer , and electricity tools etc.
Overall , it is evident that the maximum use of electricity in England at the time of winter for the heating rooms and purpose of water but the leat use of electricity for the lighting , tv , radio vacumm cleaner , and for electricity tools also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65555212921 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433333333333 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8601476334 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.25 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500399708611 0.215688989381 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.229026408281 0.103423049105 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116456235083 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362067710114 0.15604864568 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116009664738 0.0819641961636 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.