The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

Essay topics:

The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000

The illustration provides the figure of people who married and divorced in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000.
It is clear that the total number of marriages was high in comparison with those of divorces between 1975 and 2000. Besides, the proportion of divorces increased during the period of 15 years.
In the beginning year of the period, the percentage of 1st marriages and 2nd marriages accounted for about 350 and 150 thousand and those went up to 400 and 220 thousand in 1990, after which those fell by about 350 and over 200 thousand in 1995. In addition to, within the period of 5 years from 1995 to 2000, there was decrease for the number of people who married with over 300 thousand in 2000 while the opposite was true for those who divorced, about over 250 thousand in 2000.
In 1995, the figure of 1st marriages was highest, followed by those of 2nd marriages, about nearly 350 and 150 thousand. Furthermore, the number of divorces was lowest with under 100 thousand. The proportion of divorces was twice smaller than those of 1st marriages in 1985, particularly 200 and 400 thousand and stayed the same stable with those of 2nd marriages in 1990, about 220 thousand.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rced, about over 250 thousand in 2000. In the 1995, the figure of 1st marriages w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70813397129 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44775074537 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459330143541 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.852597288 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.125 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221008025221 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132174681921 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10500736393 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182127177097 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917295182519 0.0819641961636 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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