Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the modern world, emotion is a matter which has provoked considerable debate. While there is a widely held belief that economic success directly leads to the feeling of happiness of an individual, some people argue that there are other factors that can make a person happy. In the scope of this writing, both two opinions will be discussed, and I believe that the economy and social policy affect personal happiness.
To begin, the view that happiness is directly related to economic success can be plausible. This is because money plays a vital role in improving the living quality. If people own a large sum of money, they can enjoy a lot of advanced services that make them happy. For example, most wealthy people in Vietnam can experience high-class means of entertainment such as foreign tours, five-star restaurants, luxury resorts, while many poor people are often upset because they cannot afford enough monthly spending for their living. Therefore, it is logical for many people to feel happy when achieving economic success.
However, many people believe that money does not directly bring about happiness to people. In other words, an excellent social welfare system offered by the local government can bring about joy to people. To illustrate, although Bhutan is known as the happiest country throughout the world, most people there are not rich. People in Bhutan feel delighted due to free education, free health care, and a clean environment. Therefore, it is clear that other factors can make personal happiness.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that besides economic success, other sectors such as the standard social welfare system are associated with personal happiness.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21611721612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57451053527 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0708406786 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303673082615 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104536912367 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101919233116 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177991577352 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628420828922 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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