The first pie chart illustrates the average proportion of energy usages in a typical Australia family while the second one shows the percentage of emission of greenhouse gas from this energy consumption . Overall, water heating consume the highest of proportions of total energy usages and greenhouse gas emission in Australia.
In more details, Australian use the most energy for water heating with under a half while heating and cooling systems require 20% energy. Refrigeration follow closely with only 7%. In contrast, cooling and lighting only make up a mere 2% and 4% respectively. In terms of use energy for other appliances account for 15% of total.
Similarly, a third of greenhouse gas is emitted by water heating. ㄘGreenhouse gas is emmited by heating and refrigeration come next with 15% and 14% respectively. Meanwhile, just under 10% of total greenhouse gas released by cooing and lighting. Finally, greenhouse gas is require by other appliances with just under a third of total emission.
In conclusion, it is clearly to note that water heating consume most of energy and emit the most greenhouse gas in six households in Australia.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 85
- The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant 52
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...enhouse gas from this energy consumption . Overall, water heating consume the high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, similarly, third, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18847449619 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9625707386 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168584878139 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075469266396 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049729980486 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111665683118 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04368844333 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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