The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.Describe the information shown to a university/college lecturer.

Essay topics:

The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.
Describe the information shown to a university/college lecturer.

The bar chart compares the weekly working hours of eight professions, whereas the ensuing strains encountered by these professionals are revealed in the pie chart.

As shown from the information of working hours, business men are in the dominant position among the given occupations, registering at 70 hours per week. Likewise, both doctors and movie producers are working for more than 50 hours weekly, followed by writers and programmers who work for approximately 8 hours per day. By contrast, lecturers, chefs and lawyers work for the least number of hours, which is practically halved of that of business men.

In respect to stress related illness, lecturers, however, account for a quarter of all the registered patients, which is the greatest proportion among all listed professions. In comparison to doctors and movie producers comprising 15% and 18% respectively, the fractions that are picked up by business men, chefs, writers and lawyers are practically identical at 10%. Among all these occupations, programmers merely occupy 5%.

Overall, there is no clear relationship between length of working hours and stress levels suffered by these occupations.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, likewise, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49723756906 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99916046982 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613259668508 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1112196179 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.375 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173414674522 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736515364144 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558208280304 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110543123648 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456156430482 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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