he two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feat

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he two figures below show the rate of criminal convictions among men and women of different ages in the UK and the proportion of male and female prison inmates in the British prison system.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first graph illustrates the data about the proportion of convictions based on gender in the United Kingdoms, while the second graph provides information regarding the percentage of the prisoner in the uk on both genders.

Overall, it is clear that the large number of the uk prisoners is men and at a glance at the line chart revealed some similarity between the age group in both sexes committing higher crimes.

Increasing from 2% at age 10-year old to the highest figure (16%) at 20-year old, men prisoners then declines exponentially of about 8% in the age of 25 to 40 years old. This followed by a plateau at the age 45-year old, then at the elderly period dropping considerably to about similar number that of initial age. The women criminal convictions, meanwhile, commences at null per cent in 10-year old, reaching the peak to somewhat in the vicinity 5% in the 20s, followed by a steady fall at the age of 25 to 50 years old and finishing at 0% in 60s.

Moving to the proportion of criminal prisoners based on the gender reveals that the majority of the crimes are men (96%), while the women share the remaining number.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, second, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69651741294 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66910670278 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547263681592 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.4521014557 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.333333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.5 22.9334400587 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164077367327 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959545108075 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426805045354 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118075917787 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304938530457 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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