The illustration shows information about how igloo is build from snow.
The process provided depicts the procedure in which igloo is built from snow.
Overall, it is evident that the process consists of 5 stages, which commences at finding the source of hard-packed snow and culminates in covering the entrance hole with snow blocks.
As can be seen from the process given, the first stage is that hard-packed snow is found before being cut by the snow saw into several ideal snow blocks, which is about 15 inches high, 3 inches long and 8 inches wide. Large blocks are placed at the base in order to maintain the steadiness of the igloo, while the block, which is slightly over-sized, is used for the last opening on top. In the third stage, snow blocks are smoothed the edges and then they are placed in a circle building upward. Afterwards, a hole is dug under the wall which aims to create an entrance.
As far as the process is concerned, the following stage is that loose snow is shovelled onto the igloo with the purpose to pack it into all crevices. Then, the internal surface of the igloo is smoothed by hand and all the snow inside the igloo is also shoved out. In the last stage, a hole is dug in the shape of the desired entrance before being covered with snow blocks as a main door.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45333333333 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25786526515 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6143252352 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.333333333 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215397241287 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095665871221 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601646024792 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146495436177 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446959019689 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.