The illustrations below show how chocolate is produced. Summarise the
informaiton by selecting and reporting the main features.
The visual illustrates the information of 10 steps process of making chocolate.
The ripe red pods grow from a cacao tree especial from a parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. After pods grow enough they harvested it, inside of these pod it is a white cocoa beans which we bring it to fermented movement. Continuing, those fermented beans spread to dry by the sun. Those product will put in a large sacks, transported by train or lorry to the factory respectively. It will be roasted up to 350 degree heater. Follow by it is a crushed beans and then all the outer shell can be remove. The inner part of out shell put in a pressed liquid chocolate produced naturally, chocolate liquid made out. This is also the final step on the process of making chocolate from the cacao tree.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...red pods grow from a cacao tree especial from a parts of South America, Africa a...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a part' or simply 'parts'?
Suggestion: a part; parts
...s grow from a cacao tree especial from a parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia...
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Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m a cacao tree especial from a parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. Aft...
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Line 3, column 295, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this product' or 'Those products'?
Suggestion: This product; Those products
...rmented beans spread to dry by the sun. Those product will put in a large sacks, transported ...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'sack'?
Suggestion: sack
... sun. Those product will put in a large sacks, transported by train or lorry to the f...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'heater' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'heaters'.
Suggestion: heaters
...ly. It will be roasted up to 350 degree heater. Follow by it is a crushed beans and th...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: HELL[3]
Message: Did you mean 'she'll'?
Suggestion: she'll
...l can be remove. The inner part of out shell put in a pressed liquid chocolate produ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 647.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58865248227 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53851177862 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652482269504 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7121702411 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 112.824112599 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0501481228543 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0192425327637 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277301410893 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0465354245212 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00793763096356 0.0819641961636 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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