Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.
Climate change is happening at an alarming rate, which lead to an argument that does it is relate to the discipline authority promulgated for inhabitants. Do the rule need to change? After numerous accidents occurred to planet, I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In this essay, I will explain and give my opinion about this hot debate.
Initially, the growth of population are leading to over hunting. Individuals demand are depend so much on wild life consumption. Naturally, some lawbreakers willing to hunt animals event that animals are on the verge of extinction. To satisfied people temporary interested dogs also become a part of meal in some several country despite the moral aspect. Moreover, some unethical person would pay numerous money to have rhino's horns for decoration though one horn can harm one rhino badly. If one hundred people want to have rhino's horn, one hundred rhino will be kill meaningless. In consequent, rhinoceros population will be blow out significant while also running animals food chain.
In addition, enviroment change affect people life immediately. We can not live in a friendly world while the diversity of animals reducing, plant is illness also cause dangerous for human health. anything we eat have the chance to hurt our strength either occurs rare disease. All of this happen because of human responsibility as well as government has not punish them strictly. Everything they do claim their benefits first and has not put them into trouble so they continue break the rule without hesitate.
In conclusion, authorities should seriously warn citizen what they will lost if natural disease exist. Regulation made to be more considerable to protect eco-system from unworthy events.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
... which lead to an argument that does it is relate to the discipline authority prom...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: be
... which lead to an argument that does it is relate to the discipline authority prom...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...ich lead to an argument that does it is relate to the discipline authority promulgated...
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Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In this essay, I will explai...
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Line 3, column 669, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...blow out significant while also running animals food chain. In addition, enviroment ...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anything
... also cause dangerous for human health. anything we eat have the chance to hurt our stre...
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Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'punished'.
Suggestion: punished
...nsibility as well as government has not punish them strictly. Everything they do clai...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25266903915 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75727461286 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690391459075 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9280327515 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6111111111 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701770112554 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205291785538 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264409058499 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418733521419 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02436321405 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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