Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples
Climate change is happening at an alarming rate, which lead to an argument that does it relate to the discipline authority promulgated for inhabitants. Do the rule need to change? After numerous accidents occurred to planet. I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In this essay, I will give my opinion about this hot debate.
Initially, the growth of population are leading to over hunting. Individuals demand are depend so much on wild life consumption. Naturally, some lawbreakers willing to hunt animals event that animals are on the verge of extinction. Moreover, some unethical person would pay numerous money to have rhino's horns for decoration though one horn can harm one rhino badly. If one hundred people want to have rhino's horn, one hundred rhino will be kill meaningless. In consequent, rhinoceros population will be blow out significant while also running animals food chain.
In addition, enviroment change affect people life immediately. We can not live in a friendly world while the diversity of animals reducing, plant is illness also cause dangerous for human health. anything we eat have the chance to hurt our strength either occurs rare disease. All of this happen because of human responsibility as well as government has not punish them strictly. Everything they do claim their benefits first and has not put them into trouble so they continue break the rule without hesitate.
In conclusion, regulation should made to be more considerable to protect eco-system from unworthy events
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nhabitants. Do the rule need to change? After numerous accidents occurred to planet. ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... I strongly agree that laws should have the consider variation. In this essay, I will give m...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...blow out significant while also running animals food chain. In addition, enviroment ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Anything
... also cause dangerous for human health. anything we eat have the chance to hurt our stre...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 360, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'punished'.
Suggestion: punished
...nsibility as well as government has not punish them strictly. Everything they do clai...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24796747967 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78862973758 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69918699187 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0067162103 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9411764706 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4705882353 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0690709229238 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0213514286011 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292464224719 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374456504896 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029755937685 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.