The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
In today's world the competition is seen everywhere like for example a student who wishes to get first rank an employeer who wants to get a promotion in that way every task has become so competitive that people don't really think of anything else other than chasing dreams and running through rough days.
Firstly,surviving in the present competitive world is definitely a tougher one.There are few advantages to cope up with the present situations although this creates a major problem in other side of the life.When it comes to advantages it is that we are trying to have a better life comparing with others like example purchasing a car then a house such wishes keep pushing in our mind and although this gives you a good status and individuality we are forgetting the family importance neglecting parents and not getting married in the right age just to earn more money.
Secondly,In olden days there was not much interests on earning and spending money and even working lifestyle is different at present which in return effects our health and in the past a family is always seen having dinner together have a good time but now children hardly share time with parents as they are busy in their own life as settling things and goals as well as earning money.Although it racing and leading a hustling life we tend to introduce new habits to relieve from stress like alchohol,smoking which effects our health in later life.
Thirdly,People also don't really tend to care about who is living in their next door and they do not mingle with people as it wastes their time instead they invest in something which can benefit only for themselves.Such kind of thinking is effecting the society like for example if there is a robbery in the next house they don't really care unless nothing happens with them.Such kind of thinking impact the later generation where there is no interaction with person to person.
In the conclusion,Would agree with the speaker and solution could be only if individuals tend to notice the problem and work accordingly rather than suffering it later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 965.302439024 186% => OK
No of words: 367.0 196.424390244 187% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89918256131 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 3.73543355544 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76517223521 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 106.607317073 198% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574931880109 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 283.868780488 196% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 187.754937796 43.030603864 436% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 299.666666667 112.824112599 266% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.1666666667 22.9334400587 267% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.3333333333 5.23603664747 427% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186859298027 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17986174306 0.103423049105 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.287475834902 0.0843802449381 341% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17986174306 0.15604864568 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.287475834902 0.0819641961636 351% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 13.2329268293 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.02 61.2550243902 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 10.3012195122 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.06136585366 124% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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