The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in United Kingdom.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph compares the mean highest temperature per day of four particular cities including Auckland, Christchurch, London and Edinburgh.
Overall, it can be seen that while two cities in New Zealand become colder in the middle of the year but warmer eventually, the opposite is true for their counterparts.
Initially, in January, the average daily maximum temperature of Auckland accounts for nearly 25 degrees, which is a bit higher than that of Christchurch. After that, a significant decrease is seen in the mean highest temperature per day of Auckland and Christchurch to stand at 15 and nearly 10 degrees respectively, which is followed by a dramatic increase of 7 to 8 degrees until the end of the year.
According to the graph, from scratch, the proportion of the mean daily temperature of london and Edinburgh got the same at over 5 degrees. Then, from May to June, standing at around 15 degrees, the average daily maximum temperature of two cities in the UK is as much as its counterpart. This situation occurs again in September, which follows a noticeable growth to a peak of over 20 degrees in london. However, in December, the temperature of london and Edinburgh only accounts for the same figure at the beginning after dropping dramatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...a bit higher than that of Christchurch. after that, a significant decrease is seen in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00947867299 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01954877509 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.286056375 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.125 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.375 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321078988766 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141077814834 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731842009839 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195454028416 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460709371938 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.