Some believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both views and offer your own opinion
Some people say that only by coming to terms with an awkward circumstance like an unexpected job or lack of finance does everything seem best. However, others oppose that people should make great efforts and stand trial for ameliorating the problems. although both ideas have their own merits, I agree with the second and shall put forward some argument to advocate my stand.
On the one hand, there are several relevant reasons for some people to support adapting to a bad situation. Firstly, it cannot be denied that quite many people tend to gravitate towards accepting in lieu of complaining about the issues, especially related to finance. it is simply because those do not want to become a heavy burden on their families or friends in the least. Moreover, this way can somehow create more opportunities for people if they know who they are. what I mean is that when they do not possess such a professional qualification that they can be employed by their favorite enterprises, they should accept this fact and embark on other jobs which can be even unsatisfactory. As a result, not only are they able to earn their living but also make improvements on skills.
On the other hand, others argue that it is better to attempt and make such cases more optimistic. In fact, striving for better situations is undoubtedly an effective way for people to develop themselves although they may suffer from some difficulties. For example, having obtaining favourite jobs in view but not recruited, people often have to spend years studying and joining the line of unemployment. but if they succeed, a new world can be opened and they will probably stand numerous chances. Nevertheless, if not, they will still achieve many skills and experience which play a pivotal role in this society.
In conclusion, each approach proves its own perks as I have mentioned before but I get lean towards making attempt and improve cases. Personally, I always appreciate new challenges and also I can see a multitude of advantages that it brings about in the long run compared to accepting what I do not want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, for example, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90422535211 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72393637938 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597183098592 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5949779592 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.8125 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1875 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162352562036 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509244229678 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512020019767 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095668687646 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337485947741 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.